i have already written the essay but the professor made some comments on the paper that either i need to add or fix. i have attached the original essay and the paper with the comments. i need to get an A on this essay so i need to see that you have added or fixed all the comments in the right way and i prefer if you have a background on the book. ( Equiano, Olaudah, The Life of Olaudah Equiano or Gustavus Vassa, the African, Written by Himself, ed. By Angelo Costanzo (Peterborough, Canada: Broadview Press, 2004)) 
i won’t accept anyone that doesn’t have any background or don’t know the material. i don’t want a summary of the story, i want details.